Good God, do not stop writing fiction. Enthralled from beginning to end. Novel concept, even better execution. The only danger is it idealizes love in a Hollywood way that sets too high a bar. But you do it beautifully.
thank you! and I agree, the instant connection is something I felt hesitant about since slow growth is more healthy for lasting relationships. so I appreciate that point!
Good God, do not stop writing fiction. Enthralled from beginning to end. Novel concept, even better execution. The only danger is it idealizes love in a Hollywood way that sets too high a bar. But you do it beautifully.
thank you! and I agree, the instant connection is something I felt hesitant about since slow growth is more healthy for lasting relationships. so I appreciate that point!
Enjoyed this!
The main character held my interest. I could not suspend disbelief. The idea that avoiding love kept people young seemed outrageous.
that’s why it’s fiction!
"Slow growth" - what a lovely term! I'll remember that.